Warrning!!

Warrning!!

A Poem by Moonbeam Rose
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Just a bit or raw feeling that I needed to get off my chest

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Show me what you want from me

Tell me what you need of me

Let me be the one you want

Let me be the one for you

Kee me close

Warm your bed

Yeah I bet you

Wish I could do that

You might be handsome

You might be bold

Hell I know you are daring

But take a breath

This wont last long

My ride is short

This won't be long

Tere is no wait in line

So come on through

I'll show you just

What I can do

But mark my words

Harm me and you'll pay

Do not use me

Though I know you will

So be ready

When I go off on you

Be ready for my wrath

Hell hath no fury

Like this woman

Who you scorned

© 2008 Moonbeam Rose


Author's Note

Moonbeam Rose
Please ignore the type O's

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Wow this reminds me of my poem "Highway of love" in that it caontains many warnings like mine does I love this kind of poem and your flow was fantastic.... really wonderfully done... really wonderfully done indeed... p.s. the opposite sex will always break our hearts, its how they mend them afterward that counts...

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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loved the journey

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful, warning is one of my favorites by far.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow this reminds me of my poem "Highway of love" in that it caontains many warnings like mine does I love this kind of poem and your flow was fantastic.... really wonderfully done... really wonderfully done indeed... p.s. the opposite sex will always break our hearts, its how they mend them afterward that counts...

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I enjoy your flow and the many warnings this person recieved. I like how the caution came through so strongly with the words your chose and the threats were really good it made me read it twice. Now you know I have a twisted mind so for me the threats were actually sexy. Well written and delivered!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 20, 2008

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Moonbeam Rose
Moonbeam Rose

Santa Maria, CA



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Hey there, my name is Kat. I love to write, especially fanfiction and poetry. I am a huge Star Wars, Twilight and Harry Potter fan. I also RPG as a few characters in each aspect. I am a very proud Wic.. more..

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