Vampire Kisses

I feel his fangs
Cut into my flesh
I feel my life start to fade away
I cry out for a love, who doesn't know.

I cry out for my family
Who can not help
Friends who aren't there
Because I thought they never cared

His kiss is bitter sweet
My life is at an end
How can I live like this?
Dead by day

Alive by night
Please put the stake
Threw my heart
and let me die in peace

Reviews

[Charisma Moonfairy]

Must agree with the daughters of darkness on this one-HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT and on and on and on and on, etc. etc.....lol

Whoever said not to judge the book by its cover? I liked the title, and the poem was able to carry what I expected. This has good form, strong message, and well painted descriptions. good read

[Whitney Traylor]

niiiccce. now, what do you have in regards to someone else as a host? not to be malicious toward your preferences, but i relate to more sadistic pieces. not that i'd try to hurt you:)

[Charisma Moonfairy]

Oooh I love the title Vampire Kisses first off, second off I love the poem in itself. You amaze me with every poem you write mt love

[Dark Daughters]

That's hot! Ok sorry I couldn't come up with a better review but that was hot :-p