A world of Good

Just in a lovey gushy mood. ahaha :]

You make me smile when I am crying.

you make me laugh when I am dying.

I can't express how great you make me feel.

Although they say I love you

And some say I should hate you,

I feel none of the above.

It's sort of depressing

But I am guessing

You feel the same way too.

You bring me out of my shell

that I stay so oftenly locked away in.

You bring color to me cheeks and a squint in my eye

and although I would like to I cannot deny.

You do a world of good to me.

Author's Note

I don't really do poems that rhyme.. or well I haven't in a long time, so I'm out of practice... does it sound ok? I don't care much if it's good. I just want to know if it sounds ok.

Reviews

[Impulse]

It sounds ok to me. Sounds pretty amazing actually. Nice job =]