Our First Kiss

This is a description of the moment my girlfriend and I had our first kiss. I tried to carry as much emotion as I could into this poem. Tell me what you think. Any advice would appriated.

Laying in a feild of lush green grass, Laying next to each other lookin' at the sky. That perfect blue sky behind those perfect white clouds, But they are nothing compared to you. I lay there looking at you as you watch the clouds roll by, You watch me as I lean over you and give you a kiss. You look into my eyes as I lean back, Our eyes locked, not looking anywhere but at each other. Those shining brown eyes looking into mine just freezes me, Im stuck there just looking at an angel. Just sitting there thinking "is this real?" Then I lean down and kiss you again and know this is not a dream. A perfect sky, perfect clouds, perfect feild, people place, Me sitting there just thinking "this is my perfect girl" <3

Author's Note

Im sorry if I spelled anything wrong or missed or misplaced puncuation, i'm not the greatest at those kinds of things. Like i said in the description any advice would be appriated.