4 Words

I was taught a magic spell,
by a witch whom I knew well;
how to stop a heart.
She didn't use potions, just words,
She's got it down to an art.
First, she takes a sigh of air,
and acts if she couldn't care,
and said these 4 words:

I DON'T LOVE YOU.

This Witch knew what spells to use,
she had a victim in me.
I wasn't exactly sad,
too far impressed for that.
oh, what that Witch could do.
Sitting up in bed,
she cleared her throat and said
you excite me....YOU DO!
But...

I DONT LOVE YOU.

Sadly she knew that I would do,
every little thing she told me to.
So I gave careful thought,
about what....
I should do,
and, what I should not.
Next came her 4 Words
with just 1 twist.
She didn't speak
or move her lips.
Still I heard;
I DON'T LOVE YOU.

Author's Note

thank u in advance 4 any constructive criticism.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice of words and thoughts. You create good vision and thoughts in the poetry. I liked how you gave strength and purpose to the words. Words can have value and can be de-valued also. Thank you fro sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote