THE LIGHT

There was a time before

When there was only darkness

You brought the light

Once things were cold

You brought the warmth

Once things were empty

You gave them substance

You have lit the flame

You have brought the light

The light lit by love’s true fire

Can never be extinguished 

Reviews

[Relic]

..................Well put. There's a warmth to this that makes it pleasant to take in.

[alanwgraham]

Hi Steven. This is the kind of poem I write myself. The message is simple and no one can mistake it. I'm not that great at opaque metaphor - writing or understanding! Your strong structure also supports your message.
Regards,
Alan

[iamshadowine]

really enjoyed reading this poem! brilliant job! keep writing :D