Again

To T.L.

Give me one more chance!
I would like to dance.
Don't break me more!
I am on the floor...

I want a new start
deep in my true heart!
Don't leave me alone!Girl!
Stay a little longer!

I just look back.
I can't stand your lack!
Please don't lie,
Never say goodbye!

These are the news...
I don't want to lose.
I really love you!
What more can I do?

2013.03.15.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Perfect! That's a pretty impressive poem. Here I can find some love, emotions and memories into the poem. You just tried to express the feelings of your heart your love and you really didn't do that bad job. It's good to read and it's a kind love that you showed to your love.

Keep on!

[Steven Croat]

Thank you for reading and commenting

[Great Aunt Astri]

The affirmation of love! Well expressed.

[Sami Khalil]

A good rhyming poem...Thank you for sharing...:).....................

[Steven Croat]

Thank you for reading!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............