The lost star

I wrote this poem to one of my friend...

The night ticked
and dissolved into silver dust.
This second can be the last.

Where are you?

(...frozen air...)
I fear
your secret
on the grey street.
There isn't a trace!
Just a huge dark space...

I see the upset sky.
I can't find you,
in vain I try...
your smoldering light
don't wave in the night...

Author's Note

2012-03-20

Reviews

[D]

Biztos jó barát volt. A szavaidból kivehetõ, hogy a hiánya nagy csapást mért... Szépen megfogalmazott vers.
100/100.

[Steven Croat]

Köszönöm, hogy írtál! Örülök, hogy tetszett és hogy erre tévedtél :)

[Stephen]

Not a bad shot! I like the way you express your feelings about your friend in the deep down words!

[Steven Croat]

Thank you for reading! :)

[maria ( rose)]

I love the imaginative writing. Very good "the lost star" great title
-maria

[Steven Croat]

Thank you! :)