�Hover In Conscious�

�Hover In Conscious�

A Poem by Steven Pottle


…Like the car lights finding a sudden black spot curve just in time
Like a well thought of loved one safe and wrapped in blankets
Like the worm that finally discovered a wet soil escape in the rain
Like being able to touch the ceiling in a room too small
Like all these years that you’ve been alive and you’ve never seen a real live firefly
Like you can never quite catch the Summer arriving-
You just wake one morning and the sun is constantly shining
With those birds that just need to sing
And you wonder what their songs really mean
Like being happy and in love…
I’m drifting off, falling asleep.

Like owning the newest complete home entertainment system
Like the sensations that the cat is feeling while sleeping on the new speakers
Like having no one sitting in front of you in the cinema
Like having Joe Dallesandro over for dinner
Like telling your crap boss exactly what you think of him
Like blowing up your landlords kitchen on the very day that you are leaving
Like having your ankles high above your head, high in the air-
Feeling and being like a kid again
Only now without the pain…
I’m drifting off, falling asleep.

I’m drifting off again
After my exhausting journey
I’m finally sleeping-
Like a hovercraft resting at the waters edge.

 

© 2008 Steven Pottle


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I enjoyed this very much. The imagery is excellent and some nice things to think about. You could probably add on to it. It's better to think on the good than the bad. Wonderful. T

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Clever work. Liked the way that you placed the thoughts together and especially the description of the summer arriving. The hovercraft resting at the waters edge is a nice image.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 10, 2008

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Steven Pottle
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