Meadows Hunter

in them meadow I sit

 

nothing can disturb me

 

I watch the birds fly high above the grass.

 

Deer slowly walk throguh

 

the dry grass eating some as they walk by

 

i look throught the scope

 

taking one last note

 

before the deer scatter

 

and somethign shatter.

Reviews

[char]

Funny! I thought you were heading in a completely different direction with that. ;)

[Steven Ingels]

Did you like it

[char]

Of course I like it! :)

[Steven Ingels]

Cool thanks

[s y e]

Nicely written, I like it!
Good job Steven!

[Steven Ingels]

thank you noodles

[s y e]

No worries