Typical Saturday morning

We rise with dignity.

We fight until there is no more. 

The enemy will be faced with regret. 

We still have a chance. 

Let the battle end and let's start the war. 

I fall to my knees with you in my sight. 

I wondered what your family would be thinking of you. 

I surely didn't care no more as I watched the bullet go through your skull. 

I have no regrets until we meet again ill save a bullet just for you

Reviews

[Abby]

This is something new, but it definitely is really good. You've done a great job with this writing, and I enjoyed it. I wouldn't have figured out that it was gunna end like that.

Lee.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Oh my brutal and heartbreaking.

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I did not get the ending to be honest, though I liked the tone of it as a whole.

[Steven Ingels]

He's. saving a bullet for his next victim

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I would not have seen that!

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

Very good bro. Sounds never ending.

[Acer]

Again it's a nice piece & peace, great job again buddy...

[Holly Mason]

this has a lot of meaning behind the words
thank you for sharing it

[Alexis suzzanne]

This a very powerful statement etched into it... are you saying that you love a girl but she hurts you and you don't know why you love her? although you still let her keep coming back .

[Steven Ingels]

Actually it's about war. When there is an enemy there will always be a bullet waiting for them

[Alexis suzzanne]

Oh wow , it sures is easy to tell a person by what they take out of writing. Now that you told me it makes perfect sence.

[Steven Ingels]

Awesome

[Alexis suzzanne]

yeah...

[Steven Ingels]

Soooo how are you

[Alexis suzzanne]

I'm good how are you ?

[Steven Ingels]

im doing alright. sorry it took a while to respond. havent been on here that much

[Alexis suzzanne]

that's alright and I'm the same way

[Christopher Booyakasha]

Whoa! Look at Steveo. Nice! CALL OF DUTY!

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

HAHA Call Of Duty

[s y e]

Wow, this was deeeeeeeeeeep

[Steven Ingels]

Thanks

[s y e]

Welcome