Donuts!

Donuts!

A Poem by Ellay
"

mmm....donuts...

"
 Donuts are quite good
      Like a small piece of heaven
Nom nom nom nom nom

© 2015 Ellay


Author's Note

Ellay
Can you tell I was hungry when I wrote this.....:)

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MMMMMMMMM!!!! LOVE donuts. so good and sugary. LOL

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yummy!!!!!!!! Haha a funny short piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

Thank you :D
So cute! So delicious! I'm psychic and I can feel you were hungry. nom nom

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

Haha, I was hungry when I wrote this :) Thank you for the review!
Donuts are so delicious! This spoke to my soul!

Posted 9 Years Ago


hahahaha.... a fun senryu, Pepitro... sounds like a Homer Simpson moment :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

Thank you :D
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9 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
This was a fun read :) donuts...now i'm hungry... Lol :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

Thank you :D
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Sai
I'm really hungry for donuts now. I could imagine a group of children peering through a bakery and singing this song while licking their lips.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the review :D That is just the type of picture I was going for!
i can taste them now,hot out of the bakery

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

Yeah there are a million near me as well and everyday I'm just like "give me ur donuts!" XD
 wordman

9 Years Ago

i was in the restaurant business for 14 years,never worked around donuts i would be a lard a*s if i.. read more
Ellay

9 Years Ago

So would I lol! :D
Lol, nice senryuu! Made me hungry :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

Thank you :D
ROFL... literally laughing out loud at this one... thanks for making my day Pepitro... nom nom nom nom.. hilarious! Nice to see someone who enjoys 'quite nice' donuts! :D
Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ellay

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :D

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Added on July 21, 2015
Last Updated on July 21, 2015
Tags: +Donuts, +Food, +Funny

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