Smile

     Her smile has moved me

It made my heart skip a beat

  My motivation

Author's Note

Let me know if I should try different genres of poetry

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

The answer is, "Yes, we all should spread our poetical wings and try every form of poetry."
How else to become truly skilled in every aspect, and to find our niche in the art we so deeply love and are passionately embraced by.

This is a most appealing and romantic Senryu, Pepitro … so very moving to the heart's affection.
To fulfill the rules for this form, add another syllable to the first line to make it a true 5/7/5 syllable Senryu.

Thank you, My Friend, for sharing you excellent craft with us! ⁓ Richard

[Ellay]

Thank you! I will definitely fix the first line, and thank you for pointing it out to me! :)

[Captain Rilen]

Short and happy! Another lovely piece.

[Ellay]

Thank you :)

[Elodie Thompson]

You should definitely try different genres of poetry. Yor simplistic style and the elegance of the words send a strong message.

[Ellay]

Thank you :)

[Elodie Thompson]

No worries.

[Phoenix247]

Made me smile. A short, sweet poem. :)

[Ellay]

Thank you for the review :D

[GPR]

Smiles also cheer me up! Loved this senryu!

[....................]

a smile is, indeed, a great motivator...a nicely-written senryu...

[Ellay]

Thank you so much :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lovely. :) i like the picture too. Its cute. :) and yes! keep writing, and try different forms of poetry too :) we all need to, only that way you can find the form that suits you the best.

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[pikachulover]

Greta poem, loved it! :) Thanks for sharing

[Ellay]

Thank you :D

[Stan Lee]

Very sweet. You're good at these... :)
Always great to try something different though.

[Ellay]

Thank you :)