ThePath

Everyone walks a line filled with bumps, but it is within ourselves that decide whether we jump over it, or crumble before it.

A path trailed by rocks,

Feet tearing by the step

Hands hoping to grab hold of something,

Nothing.

 

Nothing.

No one is there to help.

You, only you, can hold yourself up

By yourself.

Even if blood tore from your feet,

You will continue.

Continue to find it.

Continue finding your meaning.

Continue finding your happiness.

 

Continue to find something to live for.

Author's Note

My first time! It doesn't seem to flow in my opinion, but what do you think about it?

Reviews

[TheMadnessWithin]

i think its great:) i love your theme of standing on your own and looking for something to live for, very good

[Great Aunt Astri]

Sometimes reading out aloud to yourself helps to get the flow right A good first time!