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really good work Stephen, keep it up. Maybe break your paragraphs a little more and make them less of a set block to read. But I like it, well done! I'd strongly suggest continue writing it. At the end of the day, its your work and as long as you are proud of it, then that's all that counts.
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Posted 9 Years Ago

I havent finished reading yet but i seen your comment above i have been writing for over 10 years now and just a year ago decided to step into the world of novel writing it is very diffrent definitely a challenge just keep going ... i have been told a million times that you should trust in your self a script the adventures of your soul so i say the same to you now .. trust in yourself and let it flow

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Posted 9 Years Ago

you ask the wrong questions.. every story is worth writing.. it is up to the almighty author to decide which ones to pursue.. you have a good beginning that makes me keep coming back..

Posted 10 Years Ago