Can't it be just me and you..

.. yeah ..

I hate that you can't always be mine,

I get that there are others too, thats fine.

But why can't it just be me and you,

I guess i just need to get a clue.

After everything we've been through,

I don't see why, i can't have just you.

I sound so stupid, i sound so lame,

But i always smile when i hear your name.

Just tell me why i hurt inside,

Everytime i thought you cried.

I hate when your in so much pain,

It's like your heart was left out in the rain.

So let's just say it's me and you,

I'm always going to help you through.

I'll try my best to take away that pain,

And i'll be the one who brings your heart in from the rain.

Author's Note

I tried.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Your note says you tried.. well you did more than that.. you "did".. very nice flow and emotions here. Many struggle with this.. loving someone and just wanting them to yourself.. to protect them and be there whether it be a friend or something higher.. we want to be the ones to take the pain away and create a smile.. this is beautiful for one so young to write! Keep going .. this is soo sweet!

[NightsShade]

You wrote a very nice piece! The emotion was there and the flow was nice. I agree with LisetteCanWrite?, you did more than try. The meaning behind the poem was clear, and simply understood. It's tough loving someone and only wanting them for yourself, you always want to help the person and make their life just a little bit easier, but sometimes it's not that easy. Keep on working.

Enjoy life.
Sarah

[Jeddie]

Very Nice you achieved something magic above and its really a nice piece to read :D

[Shadow19]

this is really good, something that i was going threw sort of, with all the emotion
you put it:).
i love it