Making Me Fall<3

Making Me Fall<3

A Poem by StephanieDenise

You can make me fall and break me, over come and  take me.
Break my heart in two, which you always do.
Watch me cry and laugh, while I feel like trash.
Ruin love for me, which I'll never see.
Leave me wanting more, while you walk out the door.
Date my friend, make amends, act like my heart will mend.
Slam me down, while I'm bound, in your voice, my favorite sound.
See me at school, act real cool, making me sit here and look like a fool.
Kill this hate, leave those traits, make me move to a different state. Look my way,never stay, fall in love and walk away.
See her face, hit home base, stay with her for all your days.
Look at me. What did you see? That broken heart instantly.
It's your fault, that lie I always bought.
It's too late, she's caught your heart.

© 2012 StephanieDenise


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StephanieDenise
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Really nice poem that has a story behind it the rhymes as well are really good such as "Leave me wanting more, while you walk out the door"

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A guided piece that relates the story behind the flow.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This actually reminds me of my ex...nice flow of sentences too. Can't wait to read more of your stuff :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 13, 2012
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StephanieDenise
StephanieDenise

Goldsboro, NC



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I'm 16 & I love to write. I write to heal my soul & I write to heal others. Words are not only words to me but they are everything. You are mostly defined not by your actions, but words. So therefore,.. more..

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