Love Is Crazy

First poem up comments, reviews, pleaseee?(:

Love.Is.Crazy.

Never-ending, Pointless spending.

Waste of breath, nothing less.

Trying to fix, imagined list.

Hate is fate but hate creates heart break & frustrates.

But still within, nothing is mend.

Walking through halls & playing pretend.

Unforseen places, recognized faces, all lapse into a dark, empty daze.

 Hoping to redo, having nothing to lose, all pile into an angry fuse.

One which will explode because of the blows it took whenever love was exposed.

Still, it stays for all of it's days, but praying it fades because of the craze.

Love isn't there, but friendship is fair wholeheartidly, I would assume to dare.

Reviews

[StephanieDenise]

thank you everyone so much! I'm new on here so It's great to have welcoming people :D I'm looking forward to reading everyone's stuff!

[Melody]

They should keep that in a dictionary because that was the greatest definion of love i know! Great Job! I want to see more from you!
-Melody

[Wolf]

I like that you gave a great definition to love! :)
Love the poem! Keep up with the writing!
Welcome to our cafe! :)

[Mike]

Dropping bombs haha i like the fast pace of the poem i apolgize because i am not as elequent as others