Alone.

 

Without you, I feel nothing but alone,

if you're just pretending is still unknown.

 

I wish I could understand what goes through your head,

cause the looks on your face are too hard to be read.

 

You're giving me mixed signals, and I'm not sure what's right,

I don't know where to go, I can't see the light.

 

I've been on this road many time's before,

but with you I feel like there's so much more.

 

But lately the weather has been nothing but darkness and rain,

I'm tired of hiding my pain.

 

You need to step it up if you want me to stay,

because I'm slowly drifting, drifting away...

 

Author's Note

Feel free to criticize.

Reviews

[*Private Person*]

rhyme tone and words are wonderful.

[Steph]

i really liked it, except the 2nd line of the first stanza, it just didn't flow to me or like didn't sound right. otherwise, it was really good, so good job:)
~Steph