False love

False love

A Poem by StephL

Sticks and stones
May break bones
But lies and deceit
Are what I do best, my sweet

Roses are red
Violets are dead  
I never loved you 
it was all in your head

© 2013 StephL


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Haha! This was short, blunt, and crude. I like it.

I'd just probably put "our" or "your" in the sentence "may break bones". This way it flows better.

So yeah, you should add in one of them.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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StephL

Gatineau, Quebec, Canada



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