Her

Her

A Poem by StephL
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typical classroom stuff

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I watch you go up the stairs; passing by the stars
I will love you no matter where you are
It doesn't matter how far you may fall
To be with you,I would give up heaven for hell.
You will never love someone every day
But you choose to give your love away
to one person whom you trust more then anyone else
they know you more then you know yourself.
I am addicted to your body.
Captivated by your mind.
Entranced by your soul
I wish you were mine.
Some love can be immense,
but rarely is it this intense. 

© 2013 StephL


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loving the last two lines, they really tie the whole thing together.
nice write.


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Added on January 22, 2013
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Tags: love, her, teen, passion

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StephL
StephL

Gatineau, Quebec, Canada



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