love life

I lay in bed 
listening to your heart beat
youre pretending to be asleep

the door creaks open
the light  awakens me
your naked form is all i see

you come back
and begin to cry
i sit up and sigh

i ask 'whats wrong'
you dont know
'but its killing me though'

'this isnt you' i whisper
'youre too strong'
you say 'im done'

i know it was me, but i dont know what to do
to make life worth living to you

Author's Note

i wrote this for a contest, thats why the format is weird

Reviews

[mktm.]

This is really good. Did you win the contest?

[StephL]

its not done yet, i dont think so though :/