Sharing sensual moments like this that create laughter and stimulation at the same time are things dreams are made of. It’s those moments that make the heart swell and the pulse race from laughter and excitement alike.
This is carefully and beautifully written. It allows a vivid picture to form in the mind while reading and its texture is smooth and inviting. Well done Stella
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1 Month Ago
Thank you PB, sharing these kinds of teasing and pleasures are for me what it is all about.... happi.. read moreThank you PB, sharing these kinds of teasing and pleasures are for me what it is all about.... happiness and sharing are all part of lovemaking.
1 Month Ago
I would agree. Life is full of many things and intimacy and private moments are a big part of it
This piece shows the diversity in your writing. The sensual theme running through it gives your reader an insatiable appetite... for more! I
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Hi Kelly , i am a multi faceted poet i am afraid, i write about almost anything other than politics .. read moreHi Kelly , i am a multi faceted poet i am afraid, i write about almost anything other than politics and angst .To be honest i never sit down to write a poem unless an idea or a moment comes to me during the day, they are almost spontaneous this last few years and i feel the better for that.
I suppose poetry becomes a journey that changes direction as it goes along, new paths emerge to be followed , that is how it has been for me anyway and thank you for your very kind and lovely review :)
A Delicious piece, Stella, so well and sensuously written, I think all my 5 senses clicked in! I makes me feel good, Thanks!😃
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1 Month Ago
Good evening Dylan, i am so pleased that my poem gave you a feel good lift.
We need to have l.. read moreGood evening Dylan, i am so pleased that my poem gave you a feel good lift.
We need to have laughter and fun in all sensual things for our wellbeing ...
Delightfully sensual and teasing Stella. So different from your usual writes. Took me back in time it did. Wonderfully visual and penned perfectly, love this poem.
Chris
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Hi Chris, well yes i think we poets often get put in certain boxes of expected genre, but we do have.. read moreHi Chris, well yes i think we poets often get put in certain boxes of expected genre, but we do have other expressive ways of writing that are sometimes too personal to want to share.
Anyways i decided to share this one , not only the young enjoy freedom and pleasure ( they think us oldies never tried pleasurable teasings lol),
it's a one off , rest of these memories are mine alone 😁Stella
1 Month Ago
Yes, you are giving the younger ones a run for their money :) What a lovely memory. I’ve got a few.. read moreYes, you are giving the younger ones a run for their money :) What a lovely memory. I’ve got a few as well :)😊
i bet you have Chris, and i bet you smile to yourself when you remember as though it was yesterday �.. read morei bet you have Chris, and i bet you smile to yourself when you remember as though it was yesterday 😍
1 Month Ago
Well, who knows, perhaps one day, I’ll go sensual myself 😂
1 Month Ago
Haha , why not ... just enough to arouse interest and then youngsters will know delights are not exc.. read moreHaha , why not ... just enough to arouse interest and then youngsters will know delights are not exclusively theirs... leave them guessing what they don't yet know about 😂
Love this Stella, so evocative and sensual, thank you for sharing. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
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I felt it all again just writing about it, not that i share my intimate memories very often 🥰 read moreI felt it all again just writing about it, not that i share my intimate memories very often 🥰
Pleased you enjoy the read my friend.
Sharing sensual moments like this that create laughter and stimulation at the same time are things dreams are made of. It’s those moments that make the heart swell and the pulse race from laughter and excitement alike.
This is carefully and beautifully written. It allows a vivid picture to form in the mind while reading and its texture is smooth and inviting. Well done Stella
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1 Month Ago
Thank you PB, sharing these kinds of teasing and pleasures are for me what it is all about.... happi.. read moreThank you PB, sharing these kinds of teasing and pleasures are for me what it is all about.... happiness and sharing are all part of lovemaking.
1 Month Ago
I would agree. Life is full of many things and intimacy and private moments are a big part of it
Ah! this is so sweet and naughty at the same time. The pleasures of sharing - this read like a soft romantic piece that is alluring with words and memories. I like the you paint the experience of this sharing, so captivating. enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing this, Stella.
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1 Month Ago
Sometimes the foreplay is remembered long after the climax , well it is for me 🥰
Thank yo.. read moreSometimes the foreplay is remembered long after the climax , well it is for me 🥰
Thank you for your lovely review A.H.
Wow, what a sweet yet very intimately written poem. Beauty of sharing between lovers, will always be sweet.
The repetition of "and the laughter in your eyes" emphasizes the joy and playfulness inherent in their relationship, highlighting how these moments create lasting memories.
I enjoyed this lovely poem,.
-Amy
Hi Amy and thank you for reviewing, i wasn't sure whether to share such memories or not 😊
.. read moreHi Amy and thank you for reviewing, i wasn't sure whether to share such memories or not 😊
Stella
1 Month Ago
Aww, love is beautiful, thank u for sharing, I enjoyed.
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