15. "Don't Go" Part IIA Chapter by StefanC15 “Don’t Go” Part II Are we destined to love a specific person?
Our soul bound to another from the moment we’re born. Or is ‘one true love’ a
romantic idea and nothing more? A whimsical notion created by the more
starry-eyed of our ancestors. There are seven billion people on our planet; the
idea that only one of them is your soul mate is a daunting one. The odds of
that one perfect soul akin to yours living in the same town are slim to say the
least. Nevertheless, because of my experiences I believe it’s possible.
I knew then and I know now that
Rachel is my soul mate. I’d known it from the moment I’d first looked into her
eyes. Being with her, being around her are the only times I feel sane and happy;
being around Rachel enables me to forget the horrors of my past and become a
normal, guiltless human being.
As I followed her up the stairs to her flat, my mind went through a
million different ways of telling her how I felt. It’s strange how the brain
can place such importance on the trivial. Wording was about the most
insignificant thing under the circumstances but it’s what most of my mind was
working on as I entered her home. Thinking and rethinking the same thoughts I’d
been over for the past forty minutes. As we walked through the threshold,
Rachel offered me a drink “It’s either water or orange juice, I’m afraid.” She
said, “What with the packing pretty much done, it’s not exactly a great place
for hosting at the minute.”
The flat was bare and minimally chaotic, clothes strewn about the place
with opened, half packed suitcases. I’d only been there once before and it was
different to how I remembered it. The evidence of the move made the reality of
the situation hit me, the reality of how significant my intentions were. There
was a picture of Andrew and Rachel atop one of the boxes marked ‘for airmail’
and I remember my brain beginning to work against me. That’s her fiancé it told me, she
loves him, he asked her to spend the rest of her life with him and she said
yes. They were planning to move to the other side of the globe together and
there I was thinking she might want to stay. Thinking that me being in love
with her would make any difference.
I steeled myself, reasoned that if I didn’t tell her, if I wasn’t open
with her then I’d never know how she felt and that would torment me for years.
I had enough torment going on in my head as it was, so I took a deep breath and
decided to carry on with the insanity of the situation. I politely declined her
offer of a drink and we stood in her open plan living/kitchen area looking at
one another. “So what do you want to talk about Stew?” she said sipping water
from a freshly filled glass.
I took my time. Partly out of fear, partly out of doubt. It seemed an
eternity until my brain would let me say anything. Eventually the words
trickled from my mouth, quiet and fearful. “I love you Rachel.” She looked at
me with sad eyes and turned her head away, sighing. “C’mon Stewart, don’t make
this any harder than it has to be.” She said, “You know I love you too. I love
all you guys. Chloe, Amare and you but I have to go.” I felt my shoulders drop;
she’d misinterpreted my statement as one of a loving friendship. “Besides” she
continued “it’s not like we’ll lose touch. We’ll video chat online and phone
each other.”
I closed my eyes and exhaled largely from my nostrils. “No” I said,
almost in disbelief at myself “You don’t understand.” What am I doing I thought stop
it. Before I could though, I said the words. “Rachel, I’m in love with you.” We maintained eye
contact, the short moment after I’d said it. An invisible energy passed between
us. Overwhelming, it caused me to shake. Never before in my whole life had I
been that open with anyone. She didn’t say anything, just stared deep into my
eyes. I wanted to stride over to her and kiss her passionately but we both
stood as still as statues, frozen in a moment of extreme emotional proportions.
I expected her to react differently to how she did. I expected her to
cry, tears of happiness and for her to joyously exclaim that she loved me too. I
thought that my happy ending would begin at that moment but it didn’t. She
looked at me, her face was expressionless and time seemed to slow down.
“Please” I continued, my voice breaking under the weight of my feelings and of the
situation, nearly losing the battle with the domineering silence. “Don’t go”.
The words “Don’t go” lingered in the air with the desperation of a plea
for survival. Rachel remained still; the cogs in my brain went into overdrive,
trying to think of what else to say. Trying to think of ways to convince her to
love me and stay with me. Nothing came to mind and we remained staring at each
other, locked in the grip of the moment for what felt like an eternity.
“Stewart.” Rachel eventually broke the spell, she looked and sounded
overwhelmed by the whole thing, I remember this made me feel guilty. I had
clearly put her in an uncomfortable situation. “I’m engaged… to Andrew.” She
said in a slow and explanatory way. At this point I was committed, I felt there
was something there, I knew she loved me, that
can’t be it I thought to myself this
can’t be over.
“Andrew hurts you though, doesn’t he?” The statement was a bold one and
said accordingly. As I said the words, I felt my chest tighten, The knowledge
that I’d just put myself in a ‘no going back’ situation drilled into my brain
and my whole body seemed to twitch and become prickly. A fork in the road had
just been created, I’d created it and now; Rachel will either leave him for me
or leave me for South Africa and perhaps I’d never even hear from her again. “Stewart,”
she sighed, turned her head and looked towards the floor. “You’ve asked me this
before ok… look, nothing…” She couldn’t answer, couldn’t outright deny it and I
knew at that point, as much as if she’d have given me a verbal admission. Andrew
did hurt her. I tried to seize on it,
make her realize she deserved better. “You should be with someone who really
loves you.” I said, suppressing tears. “Who treats you how you deserve to be
treated.” I saw her eyes well up again and I wanted to hold her. Tell her
everything would be ok, that we could be together and I would look after her
forever. In one final attempt to help her see, I said “Andrew isn’t right for
you, he doesn’t deserve...”
“F**k you.” The words, loud and vicious broke into the room uninvited.
Rachel and I turned our heads in unison to see Andrew stood in the doorframe to
the side of us. I’ll never know how long he’d been there but the look on his
face suggested he’d been there long enough. In place of his usual swanky grin
was a look of menace, his eyes bore into me and a heavy load of pent up hatred
was being dumped into his head and aimed at me. “Who do you think you are” he
said, his voice and body language were confrontational as he strutted into the
room. Playing the part he’d assigned to himself, the part of the alpha male.
His eyes remained fixed on mine, he positioned himself a couple of steps from
me, his tall frame intimidating and angry. “What’s the plan here Stewart?” He
said in condescending question. “You just come here and ruin everything we’ve
got?” gesturing to Rachel and himself, his hands surveying the premises and all
of it’s contents.
Abruptly, he grabbed the lapels of my jacket and brought my face close
to his. His eyes had a fire in them and I felt for a moment as though I was in
Rachel’s shoes. The aggression of the man was undeniably scary and it oozed
from his every pore. He always did well to hide this side of himself at church
and in public but here I was seeing the true nature of the beast. He whispered
the following words to me with a real sincerity “Well f**k you.”
Rachel shouted at him “Andrew leave him alone.” I was alarmed by the
fear in her voice; no one knew just how violent he was more than she did. Then,
something clicked in my head, I didn’t like that Rachel saw me as vulnerable in
the situation. That she thought Andrew could hurt me. Maybe it was pride or
maybe those primal ‘fight or flight’ instincts kicking in again but my body
reacted, separate from my brain. Taking me back to the monster I’d once been in
my kitchen, I snapped.
With a usually inaccessible strength I tore his hands from the scruff of
my jacket collars and with my right hand grabbed his neck, forcing him a few
steps backwards and slamming the back of his head into the wall. I held him
there with one hand for a moment and looked into him, examined his soul. His
face showed a mixture of pain and pure shock, he hadn’t put this in his script.
He was the one that was supposed to do the intimidating. I leaned in close to
him and with a brutal, confident honesty said, “You have no idea what I’m
capable of.”
My words shook me more than
they did him; I was brought back to reality with an enormous bang. He didn’t
know what I was capable of but I did and that scared me. My mind did what it
had failed to do before, when Paul had sat in my favorite chair, it stopped me.
I let go of Andrew’s neck and took a few steps backwards; he doubled over
coughing “f*****g freak.” He spluttered between his heaving wheezes. My vision
blurred momentarily, I felt embarrassed. I looked at Rachel, hoping for an
outstretched hand, a symbol of hope but it didn’t come. She just appeared
horrified by my brief and insignificant act of violence. All of the expectation
bled from within me, “sorry” I muttered in no particular direction and turned
and left the flat. Andrew had ruined my moment, intruded on my last chance to
find out how Rachel feels about me. All my hopes and dreams with regards to
Rachel and I had slipped through my fingers.
Outside it had begun to rain, heavily and it soaked through my clothes
almost instantly. I walked no more than a few metres down the road, stopped and
felt my heart begin to break. Before it had chance to, I heard Rachel shout my
name behind me. I turned and saw her standing in the rain, drenched and
beautiful. My heart momentarily forgot about breaking and leapt with joy.
It’s a scene I’d watched a hundred times in romantic films. A cliché
made real, we stood opposite each other in the pouring rain. I was certain she
loved me and that she’d chased me outside because she had to tell me. She slowly approached and put her hands on my
shoulders. Her face had a sad, vulnerable expression on it and as she looked
into my eyes; I could tell she was doing something she found incredibly
difficult. “I love you Stewart.” She said, tears forming in her eyes and mine. Her
tone wasn’t the one I wanted, I sensed a “but” moment. I felt like a fool, like
I’d taken a plunge and landed on the rocks, dashed and splattered a great
distance from the safety of the water in which I supposed to dive. “I didn’t
want to leave like this.” She said, her voice trembling and sorrowful. “I have to go with him, he’s my fiancé,
Stewart.” A lengthy moment passed neither of us said anything, the only sound
to be heard was the rain as it’s small droplets ferociously attacked every
surrounding surface. I felt the precipitation pouring down my face, my lips
sealed, rendered me silent. She leaned into me and rested a gentle kiss on my
cheek. “I love you.” She said for a second time. “I’m sorry.” And with that she
turned away and walked out of my life.
I stood there on the street like a statue for a long time. The tears
streamed down my face, mingling with rainwater. I could tell that she loved me,
she had a deep love for me but all that served to do was increase the pain.
Layer on more feelings of despair. I loved a woman with every fibre of my
being, every last crumb of my soul ached for her and she loved me too. Yet
because of the cruelest of cruel twists of fate, she would never be mine.
Five years later, as I pull up in my driveway outside the semi-detached
I now live in, I find myself thinking about her. I think about her every day,
she’s my soul mate and I love her and I fear that will never change. Rachel and
Andrew left the next day and still live in South Africa. I get occasional
updates from Amare and Chloe but for obvious reasons never receive direct
contact from them. I sigh and take a deep breath; I try and think of something
else. It’s my birthday and I’m having a special dinner cooked for me.
Switching the engine off, I take two more pills from the clear plastic
bag in my pocket and swallow them. I get out of the car and enter my house. On
entry, a wonderful smell enchants my nostrils and lures me to the kitchen and upon
opening the kitchen door; I’m greeted by a sight that never fails to make me
smile. My daughter Emma, my beautiful baby girl. Just one year old, she looks
at me as I enter the room and the love I have for her elevates my mood as the
sight of her always does. By the oven, my wife is cooking something on the hob.
“Smells great honey” I say to her, as she acknowledges my presence. She kisses
me on the cheek and smiles. “Well I’m making the first thing you ever taught me
to cook.” She says, “seafood linguine.”
Months after Rachel had left, I ultimately came to the conclusion I had
to move on. Chloe and I had grown closer and eventually we started dating. Now,
whilst she’s not my soul mate. Whilst I never planned for things to end up like
this; she’s my wife and the mother of my child. I’d grown up and slotted myself
into a life with her, a seemingly normal
and conventional life. © 2014 StefanCReviews
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1 Review Added on June 22, 2014 Last Updated on June 22, 2014 AuthorStefanCLancashire, United KingdomAboutBackground in film-making/script-writing. Now trying my hand at a novel. Looking for someone to help me with my writing by offering critique and suggestion. more..Writing
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