keep a flower like time

find me, just
me.
no one foll
owing, shadows speak through
the threat of light.
soft-jaw
heavy
       words
weak teeth for love
spit tooth
every truth
root
petal
tree

find me
just me
a flower i keep
like time.

Reviews

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

This well written piece reminds me of one of my favorite poets, ee Cummings...

Beautifully written.

Alisa 💫

[Steeven]

Thank you for the praise, he is one of the greats.

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Yes he is... sheer genius with word placement and emotional content...

[.]

:: beautiful... just beautiful... absolutely exquisite poetry...

[K. Louis]

"shadows speak through the threat of light"...nice line..