as seen burning on t.v.

i canpay supplylight i nd
shootese shadows leaninover`nder`gainst
fence, breakbrakelines
but if i cut a throat with a candy-cane
suffocate with cotton-c`ndy? thi
sis not myworld
two mice ar`n`ver caught in one
trap

Reviews

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:: true... true... two mice can never be caught in one trap... but one poet and one poem can make many hearts skip a beat... i think the key is not just composition but also rendition... you seem to have mastered both...

[Madison R. Forest]

I would've liked to enjoy this poem, I was really hooked by the title, unfortunately i find it very exhausting to read (required several takes) This style might be better ported to visual (calligraphy, picture of said poem), tho it is very original.

[K. Louis]

I'm liking your unconventional spelling and style..