as seen burning on t.v.

as seen burning on t.v.

A Poem by Steeven

i canpay supplylight i nd
shootese shadows leaninover`nder`gainst
fence, breakbrakelines
but if i cut a throat with a candy-cane
suffocate with cotton-c`ndy? thi
sis not myworld
two mice ar`n`ver caught in one
trap

© 2013 Steeven


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:: true... true... two mice can never be caught in one trap... but one poet and one poem can make many hearts skip a beat... i think the key is not just composition but also rendition... you seem to have mastered both...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I would've liked to enjoy this poem, I was really hooked by the title, unfortunately i find it very exhausting to read (required several takes) This style might be better ported to visual (calligraphy, picture of said poem), tho it is very original.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm liking your unconventional spelling and style..

Posted 11 Years Ago



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