em ohw

bah to restrictions

hey! hey!

hey You!

                              em

yes You!

what do You think

You're doing over there?

You just can't

hang about,

You're committing a crime!

                                     ma i

yes! two in fact.   

    tahw

Defialing Public Syntax   

and Suspicious Behavior.   

       ton ma i    

           enif sruoivaheb ym

You're Language Loitering   

and what's with the 'u'  

in You're behavior?       

   lamron, si, ruoivaheb htiw grow gnihton   

yes there is, i'll    

have to...    

are You moving away?       

                     sey    

what! fall left!        

                        on   

fall against the margin,   

or else You will be taken     

into custody!      

                                    pals a deen tnod i   

                                      ecaf eht ni

     wonk      ot   

        i       evah      

                                  tfos        

       niks     

           dne I erehw                                 

           nac ^ 

                n^geb.

Reviews

[Nix]

Love this! Made me chuckle. It's simple, smart and funny. Good change of pace from traditional styles I see all to often on this site. Love it.

[.]

:: hahahaha... i love "language loitering"... :: this is an amazing piece of work... some of the drama queens on this site really need to read this... they've been whipping us (meaning me-like not you-like) "third world country-second language english-citizens-of-the-world"... such cuckoos, i tell ya... :P :: they have a problem with those who love to write but don't wanna get abused for it... and they claim to be poets... fighting for their right to be abusive... jesus... :P

[Steeven]

glad you enjoyed it!

[.]

:)

[Emily B]

learn the rules then break them all like a champ . . . i like this