edits

they say

read with the heart

 

but heart beats

wastes not

 

every contraction

lead-in-g constriction

 

many pronouns

conjunctions

 

misused blip

of blood

 

to

point

 

no

i you we were

he she could be's

 

blood

blip

 

say

that

is all

 

Reviews

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~ i read with all my heart... and people may accuse me of this, that and the other... but i cannot ever be accused of not reading with all my heart... "that is all"... :P ~ that and the fact that this is a very heartfelt piece of writing... i'm interpreting it in my own way... and am able to relate to it... and the need for sensitivity (that i think) you are expressing in it...

[Steeven]

merely fightvsfight
one school `gainst another
how my opinion, me, hinders me from other possibilities.
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