i was born with a zipper

i was born with a zipper

A Poem by Steeven

you

opened it

the heart barely beating

belongs

to

you

 

 

© 2012 Steeven


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Thank God for zippers...

Hi Steeven.
I really like this one. For me, the lack of punctuation and capitalisation highlight your economy of words and makes for a potent and complete little cup of poet-tea.
Thanks for sharing :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steeven

11 Years Ago

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~ one of the most poignant micro micro-epics i've ever read, monsieur...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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