Simple Pleasures

Simple Pleasures

A Poem by Chuck
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A day out with my camera

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Seventy and Seventeen to twelve and twenty

Soldiers and cannons, smoke a plenty

Quartets of strings, music floating

Brides and grooms, their moments approaching

A couples baby bump proudly showing

Their expectant faces simply glowing

The sun setting the mansion alight

The piled up clouds an amazing sight

Little ones playing on the shore

Pastel chairs to be used no more

My camera and I out together

These are the images caught forever

Now by the quiet water sitting

I review in my mind the days shooting

And I am thankful once more

For the simple pleasures I adore.

© 2012 Chuck


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I love this poem! I paused my work to read a poem and this is what I chose...a good choice...to enter in to a place of thanksgiving for the GOOD God gives to us daily, if only we would see it! Chuck, you've caught it, distilled it and shared it with us!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how you have made a verbal image snapshot of your day shooting the visual. These types of poems, that catch the wonder of the everyday, freeze life for us to examine and appreciate, are some of my very favorites. Nice work. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chuck

12 Years Ago

You are very kind. I am new to this, so I appreciate your review and thoughts. It is interesting h.. read more
Shimmerbliss/CAF

12 Years Ago

Great when you can come from knowledge of both...it shows. :)
I really like the flow of the poem! usually real pleasures in life don't cost... I also a feel warmed through the poem, a very peaceful feel...
Also, I love the descriptions in your poem too!
Nice written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Chuck

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment. The simple pleasures are the best.
Cynthia Man

12 Years Ago

ur welcome ! :D
You have beautifully expressed your photography trip on paper. Its so cheerful
Pen and Photography Way to go!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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