Vulnerability of the Enchanted

This poem is about the strong hold of temptation being fondled with evil hands.The physiological pathway that is finally released within the person once a decision has been made.

I saw you in the waters, the vapors, the waves. The appearance was kept in my vision, it was saved.To thee why must you say and speak into those ways? Are ye not happy for what had been blessed and grace to be tamed?

  The perfect opportunity dawned on my head, tapped me on the shoulder then, fled. I'm strong with or  without the company of you, the voice, the touch, I have enough courage now to move. Whispers and smiles drives the adrenaline wild, but this fairy tale stops now.                

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[TheWritingWriter]

Overall, I think this piece was really good. The thing with short treatments like this is that you have to make every single word count. I feel like there are a couple of words that could have been omitted if need be.

Other than that, keep up the good work—and nice language.

I look forward to seeing more posts from you.

[Sheri]

Thank you TheWritingWriter! I will keep that in mind for my new pieces!