Locke and Keyloni

This is a short story I wrote and it's my first time writing one. Please leave feedback and rate.

Love is as deceiving as a magician to the crowd. We know it's all an illusion but something tells us to believe and trust that magician. Somewhere in that crowd there is always that one person who sees through the lies and sticks with their gut. But again that magician charms them with their act and that person is once again a believer.This is what happens in the story of Locke and Keyloni.

Locke desperately loved keyloni and could never imagine a life without her. Keyloni was his world and she helped him in the best ways possible. To him, Keyloni was as beautiful as the lilac sky during sunset. Her personality was as fascinating as government conspiracies told to you for the first time. But being that he was a typical teenage boy he couldn't keep his hands to himself and often cheated on Keyloni. Keyloni was told by numerous people that he was cheating but she was too naive to realize. Until one day she caught him in the act. Torn and mad at the world Keyloni broke up with him and thought she could never love again.
While driving home that same day, Locke got into a car accident and lost most of his memory. He only remembered his beloved, Keyloni,who he no longer has. Locke doesn't recall that he lost her so he calls and calls her phone but she wont answer him at all.

For a week straight he goes to Keyloni's house around 5 but every time he knocks no one answers; eventually he gives up. A month later he goes to her house and her brother answers the door. They soon get into an argument and things turn to the worst. Her brother soon begins to fight Locke and he pulls out a knife and stabs him. Keyloni runs down stairs to find out what the commotion is and she spots her brother holding Locke's nearly dead body in his arms. She runs over and looks Locke in the eyes and he whispers ever so faintly "I love you,you hold the key to my heart". He then pulls out a key and wraps it in Keyloni's hand then he closes his eyes.

As locke's funeral passes, Keyloni becomes more and more depressed. She knew that she couldn't live without Locke. What's a lock without a key she would continually ask herself. As more and more weeks go she contemplates suicide till she finally does it. She was so in love and hurt that she couldn't continue on, so she gave up her life to be with locke once again.
Shortly after her parents find the key hidden deep in Keyloni's room. They wonder and wonder what it belongs to because it won't fit any locks in the house. Coincidentally Locke's mom drops by with a box with a lock and says it belongs to Keyloni. After Locke's mom left they opened the box with the key only to find pictures of Keyloni and Locke and a note that reads "Together we will be forever with our baby. Please do not leave me". They look around the box some more to find out there was an ultrasound picture of Keyloni and that she was 2 months pregnant at the time of her death.