Darkness Arise

Do not feed me lies
I refuse to let you be my demise
Eventually i will rise and show you my true size.
You arent very wise
Soon you will realize...
I no longer fantasize or whisper anymore cries.
I have conquered all your doubt
I found a way out.
I feel so free i want to shout
About all the s**t you did to me throughout.
I carried your shame, took on your last name
Tried never to blame...
Only tried to help you from falling back into your dark domain

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

This appears almost biographical to me. An abusive relationship where you rose above and conquered your fears and prevailed. Then again, perchance I'm quite mistaken. It has a dark bent but uplifts you near the end.

Light beating back the shadow of despair.

At least it had a happy ending. Pretty damn good. Emotional.

[FIN]

I feel this deeply. My kind of poetry. Flows very well. Rhythm and storyline evolves awesomely.

Great emotional write.