Sonnet 130--TranslatedA Poem by Here's What I SayAnother skeleton in my poetic closet.Sonnet 130--Translated
Hey, listen up, fool Ok, the sideburns are awful, I know--it makes him look like Shaggy In speaking of Shaggy, that describes his hair! Hey, while we're on the subject, I never knew it snowed in LA until he shook his head He's probably never heard of the SUN, he's so pale! God, his laugh...I've heard maniacs with saner laughs. Have you seen him dance? But God...when I felt his face, it lit me up--genuinely. His hair may look a little weird, but I think it frames his face beautifully. Ok, he has dandruff...so do I. We're out of Head and Shoulders, ok?! So he's pale--he still plays outside more than I do. It shows up in his muscles. I can stand his laugh--his laughter is a sign to me that he's happy Once again, his dancing is strange--but it cracks me up--and makes me happy too. I don't care what you say I love him. He's worth more to me than a popular cute guy.
This is the original. I wasn't poetically savy enough to be able to mimic Shakespeare's rhyme and meter, but I got the same concept down:
My mistress' eyes are nothing like the sun; Coral is far more red than her lips' red; If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun; If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head. I have seen roses damasked, red and white, But no such roses see I in her cheeks; And in some perfumes is there more delight Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks. I love to hear her speak, yet well I know That music hath a far more pleasing sound; I grant I never saw a goddess go; My mistress when she walks treads on the ground. And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare As any she belied with false compare. © 2009 Here's What I SayAuthor's Note
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4 Reviews Added on February 27, 2009 Last Updated on February 27, 2009 AuthorHere's What I SayTorrance, CAAboutI was born on July 3rd 1986 in Torrance, California, and grew up there all my life. I had a hankering to start writing when I was eight, but didn't start actively pursuing it until I was thirteen and .. more..Writing
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