The Girl

 I scream,

But no one hears me.

My dreams,

Are the ones that fear me.

The years I have waisted.

The blood I have tasted.

My head is spinning,

My stomach is churning.

It's all i can do to keep

From turning.

Into a spirit,

So cold,

Under all the secrets.

Untold as the lies.

Unfold you will find,

The girl who's lost her mind...

 

 

Reviews

[Call Me Cash]

Nice flow, good structure. Overall it is morbid and I love that!
Thanks for posting :)

[Kierstin]

Ohh wow, this is like a whole twisted life in about 16 lines!! amazing, but kind of errie at the same time if you know what i mean... But i am glad i took the time to read this!!! :)