The Best Words Ever Said To Me

Words by: Sean

 

Your my life, I'd die for you. if the whole world turned on me I wouldn't care as long as you loved me

your the one who lights up my life, the one who gives me hope for a better future

you keeps me wanting more of life, your the one who I want to spend the rest of my life with

when i die, i'd give up my soul to spend the rest of eternity to be with you.

 

Reviews

[Eldee]

*just a technical note, you need to change most of the spellings of 'your' to 'you're' or 'you are'- unless, as the author, you fully intended for it to be spelled the other way, and I think 'keeps' should be without an s.

If I had someone saying these words to me I'd be head over heels in love. They are beautiful words, formatted into a beautiful poem. True love -truly- seems to exist in this. Congratulations!