Do some rebellion or something

So I joined capitalism 

and the weirdest thing i found was that everything is true?

it's exactly how i feared and imagined and that's not good

Like I was commuting on the train - among all the others - breathing in and shuffling in the stale air oblivious to others whilst very very aware

And I was going one stop further than most so I squeezed into the side to make space and then I realise, as people filtered out, there were f*****g loads of us on that train this morning, where exactly did they stand

Now maybe they sat under tables or merely became part of the scene, maybe they all did pyramid gymnastics, or simply played  sardines

But I imagine it was something different - that just proves how I feel about work

We all just became smaller as our souls were drained from us by an old guy with a smirk 

The worst thing for me

is that it's not just on the way,

that we all feel so taken aback 

that loss and confusion holds on for the whole day

No wonder we have no time for rebellion

With mouths to feed, bills to pay, tv to watch and people to f**k

So when you're next commuting 

On a train that smells like death

Just remember that you're being a puppet

And I don't know - maybe try to rebel or some s**t...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[genocide]

very good keep writing very good thing at rebellion

[Quinn]

Thank you, I can't wait til I get to perform this one