I'm sorry

I'm sorry

A Poem by Quinn
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A Tanka form poem.

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I am so sorry 
I see that it's all my fault 
Let me try again 
It's in my nature, sorry 
Just please don't shut me out

© 2014 Quinn


Author's Note

Quinn
edit: I had one too many syllables in line four.
Tanka poems are 5 lines long with syllables in each line being 5, 7, 5, 7 & 7

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Nice poem. A little sort and try to put more feelings to it. But great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Quinn

10 Years Ago

Thank you. Unfortunately the style of poem I chose to do, tanka, requires 5 sentences with appropria.. read more

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Added on August 10, 2014
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Quinn
Quinn

Glasgow, United Kingdom



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Sad AF. Dysfunctional AF. Queer AF. He/Him. Trans-guy. Bisexual. I am a first year university student in Glasgow who has been writing poetry since 2014 to varying levels of success. I also perf.. more..

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