The Lineage

You gotta be kidding me,

So stuck in your history that your,

Honestly consumed by the facts that built the family tree.

Where did you hear this blasphemy?

Sit back relax;

Build up this atrophy.

But its got me bleedin and still im seein,

What not forgot,

 stuff been rotting,

So shameless your forgot.

In amaze,

In a haze,

Quite so depraved,

And stay.

 Next to me darling share our sense of equality,

Cus blame is useless,

 news is truthless,

Bile just comes right out me.

Let’s share and stick together like birds of a feather,

On the twig on that tree.

Let the holy ghost,

And the midnight smokes,

Get the best of me.

S**t sticking in a smug grin wondering;

Crumbling from everything that God had once called a sin.

But God Is not capitalized automatically on this thing called Word,

But Lucifer is, dramatically I see this coincides with a burden.

A turban, quite scrutinized after 911,

When the president had wore that face, left our people with no grace.

But alien guts in a human held clutch,

Kept fighting too much for us to give up this up.

 

And unsettling, unseen.....

Broken mirrors, broken dreams....

Like a button, with out a seam...

Or a helpless love induced drug fiend.

 

Fear is methodically instilled into society,

Mutated to maniacal atrocity.

And I’ll descend into a New World,

No fetus, just a girl with no borders.

And in poison there is doubt,

look it up and you'll find out.

I will mark it with a shout,

Throw it up and let it out.

Reviews

[Epipsychologist]

I always feel like you write with a purpose, which I like, because that's how I try to right. There's a lot going on in this poem/rap, so that it all seems to kind of blend together, but the final lines resonate nicely, "I will mark it with a shout,/ Throw it up and let it out." feels kind of like a metaphor for the emotion behind this.

[Starfruitanimal]

writing with a purpose, or something i feel passionate about, is the only way i know how. thanks much for your comment !

[Pradeep Nair]

It's simply great.....
realistic and enchanting..
"Broken mirrors, broken dreams....
Like a button, with out a seam..."-- takes me to a certain heights where all the beauties of language decends upon me.

[Starfruitanimal]

I am very motivated by your positive feedback, thank you much . Keep writing and so will I !

[Sir Jaykom]

This is beautiful. Good job.. i like it

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you, well appreciated :)

[TheArchAngel]

very interesting to read, honestly im not a fan of rap, but it was fun to read, which means it was well written.
Merci beacoup for sharing

[Starfruitanimal]

im glad you liked it, i thank you for your comment :)

[Damien Davison]

I thought this was great, nice rhyming and great flow. It was fun to read, funner to rap.
My favorite lines were
"Let’s share and stick together like birds of a feather,
On the twig on that tree.
Let the holy ghost,
And the midnight smokes,
Get the best of me."
Flowed really nice, sounded/read great.

Thanks for sharing!

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you, i always appreciate your reviews :) am having some blockage lately but in moments i can yank it out myself

[Damien Davison]

I find the best way to write is when you feel a strong emotion towards something, well, clearly I guess... Stating the obvious lol. Take care!