Party Starter

Lovely labor workin late nights

Cut throats, mojo, Smirnoff just right.

Street lights, thrill rides

Fake friends, cheap things.

Reckless, dreaming,

ignore everything.

Rushes, lushes,

cash for the quality.

Wannabes,

yearnings,

love to no degree.

 

Static, tragic,

Fun and runs.

Little ones, misfits,

Drugs and guns.

Keeping running keep running keep running,

Im on a run.

Keep running keep running keep running,

 heh, this is a long one.

Too many laughs,

glass shattered,

Hackers

No speed limit, police car tracker

Always have a fun night,

Morning will be….alright,

Step into the sun light,

Secure my sunglasses tight.

Smilin at the goals I’ve met,

Been there

Done that.

Reject,

Regret

Convinced I won’t feel that.

Poor son, undone

Battles haven’t been won.

Keep running keep running keep running,

Im on a run

Keep running keep running keep running, this is long one.

 

Now where in your head did you say its ok that hey!

I really don’t give a f**k anyway.

And where did you find the time to design a plan of your demise,

To barely cry and create more stitches to frays?

Because it’s fun, she said

To get into your head.

It’s fun to let loose then hide under the bed.

And I told her quite frankly she’s hiding there anyway,

Just releasing her self,

 when she wants to come play.

 

Keeping running keep running keep running,

I’m on a run.

Keep running keep running keep running,

 heh, this is a long one.

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

kind of goes in different directions, but then so does life...and the mind keeps running and running and running and we try to capture the words to describe the best we can..and this stream of consciousness style does that pretty well..

i like the repetition of the "running" verse...it is a reminder of how everything in life including the partying , the working, the leisure times the hard times, the loves and the lost loves...they all run together...

and they compel us to write...
and in such a flow as you did here...

i do this kind of writing every so often...and this may inspire me to do some of that soon.

thanks

jacob

[Starfruitanimal]

good insight, I appreciate your comment. I will check out your work as well ! and yeah life keeps running, running from issues, running to keep going, and on and on

[Inda]

The running made poem seem endless, I don't know if that was your intent, but it added depth to the whole thing. Liked it and liked how it ends too.

[jadda12]

I thought it expressed well the experience of being young and partying and having good times and making bad decisions. Sometimes you learn from them, sometimes you don't. Good poem I really liked it

[luviva]

lol.. great and soo good!!

[Starfruitanimal]

thankyou !

[Kelsey]

I really liked this, and while I wish I could tell you why, I'm not quite sure. There's something different about it that I really enjoyed. The flow was lovely and the setup was interesting, though I do mean that in a good way. All in all, a lovely read. Keep up the good work, gorgeous. x

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you so much :)

[Sacha Davison]

Easy to read, great flow. All in all a very good poem. Good work!

[Starfruitanimal]

appreciate your reviews !

[Sir Jaykom]

I like it! Very layback and nicely written.

[Starfruitanimal]

thanks man !

[Epipsychologist]

It's hard for me to balance my life as a scholar with all these f***s I don't give. This was a fun one.

[Starfruitanimal]

appreciated :)