Another Short Ramble

Another Short Ramble

A Poem by Starfruitanimal

F**k your phones and media drones.

I bind my own -

Dancing devil to atone.

Excuse me, for me being negative.

My rhetoric form of ramification-

Is, sometimes delicate.

I only mean to appease the ones that up heave,

 the notions,

Those seem to cry when we bleed.

So in beautiful malady’s, I’ll create a melody.

And up rise this ceremony,

To something that’s celebratory.

 

 

 

© 2012 Starfruitanimal


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A beautiful malady is a kind of melody. Love this

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Starfruitanimal

11 Years Ago

thank you much
his awesome, reminds me of Bukowski, loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Starfruitanimal

11 Years Ago

honored by the compliment :)
"Excuse me, for me being negative.
My rhetoric form of ramification-
Is, sometimes delicate."-------- A truth explained with courage, isn't it?

I love the poem..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nicely penned..i liked the metaphor as well as the inner music throught the lines..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 19, 2012
Last Updated on November 19, 2012
Tags: sad, hope, evil, self destruction

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Starfruitanimal
Starfruitanimal

Wethersfield, CT



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