Short Ramble

I search for an apostle,

can’t help with withdrawal.

Like a warning sign,

I listen to my mind that testifies.

The “no you shouldn’t go there”

Cus that territory is not clear.

And fraudulence will fade the happiness that you create.                 

Don’t you see the discombobulated balance?

Of the scrutinizing habits,

lead the angel to the mote.
And confide in her only hope,

with dreams a float

Reviews

[Pradeep Nair]

search for an apostle... you will hardly find any.
search for a devil... you have a million...

does the mind testifies to our own thoughts?

As I said earlier... you have a lot of power in your words.

[luviva]

wow.. i love it and it has a certain flow that grips the reader/..!! great message

[Starfruitanimal]

i agree

[Starfruitanimal]

thankyou both i appreciate the comments

[Starfruitanimal]

and when i said i agree i thought i was on someone else page for some reason its is not letting me delete the comment !

[luviva]

its alryt dont worry