Friendship

Stab this friendship into feelings

And fortify the meaning of passion into penmanship.

I create bonds with my words,

And sacrifice hurt confused with whats ignored.

I’m sorry I ignored you impotence,

Your thought was too small for something significant.

And ever positive adrenaline that leaps from veins,

Reminds vigorously thoughts that keep me thinking insane.

I’m sorry for the damage that was done to my brain.

But you manifest a manipulative that I can’t attain.

And beauty derives from a nervous Nirvana,

That never arrives,

Until one lets her show Her

Reviews

[Sarah W. French]

I'm glad I read this. It is beautiful and elegant.

[Starfruitanimal]

well appreciated !

[Pradeep Nair]

certainly you succeeded in creating bond with words...great

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you :)

[Starfruitanimal]

i thank all of you for your kind reviews

[Erinne S.]

This was definitely not what I expected when I read the title of this piece, it was so much better! Well done with this write.

~Erinne

[luviva]

wow... just great!!

[khalid]

i thought at first i was going to read something about friendship, how much it is nice, sincere honest friendship...etc., but as soon as i started reading i felt i was so much away from what i have expected...
very nicely penned..