on the couch

on the couch

A Poem by Zanna Rose

 

your heart, my heart.
hand in hand
best friends till the end.
gossip and goodies
tears into giggles
love you till the end
out and about
or movies and popcorn
on the couch.
hand in hand
with my best friend
today till the end

© 2008 Zanna Rose


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Now that was a sweet poem . I enjoyed this a lot.
Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

Posted 16 Years Ago


Yay. All about me! :P hehe

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this one- it has a good flow and good imagery- I personally think it could be fleshed out a little more but that is just my personal taste- this seems as if it is a snippet with so much more to be said. Still a good write, though.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Zanna Rose
Zanna Rose

Colorado Springs, CO



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