Fell into a shoe?

Fell into a shoe?

A Poem by StarSandwich

Here a rhyme form me to you.
Of how I fell into a shoe. 
So listen up and listen well, for now I'll tell how I fell. 
This old shoe was wide yet deep.
Silly old me couldn't find a sheep.
So what did I do? and where did I go? 
I fell from the sky into a shoe.
Because silly old me had no sheep.

© 2011 StarSandwich


Author's Note

StarSandwich
In the photo are the biscuits I made...Have one :P

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In all honesty I don't get it. That's the cool thing!! It reminds me of Alice in wonderland. It also reminds me of a picture or a story that is shared not to make a point but to see what people take from it. I wish more people would review this!

Its cute, funny charming and leaves a person smiling. The question is do they know why?

I love it and I am going to share it :)

Awesome Job

Raven-

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StarSandwich

11 Years Ago

Why thank you, it was my most creative piece tbh. :L
Coffee Vampier

11 Years Ago

I think it's beautiful, it as a loving aspect to it :)



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In all honesty I don't get it. That's the cool thing!! It reminds me of Alice in wonderland. It also reminds me of a picture or a story that is shared not to make a point but to see what people take from it. I wish more people would review this!

Its cute, funny charming and leaves a person smiling. The question is do they know why?

I love it and I am going to share it :)

Awesome Job

Raven-

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StarSandwich

11 Years Ago

Why thank you, it was my most creative piece tbh. :L
Coffee Vampier

11 Years Ago

I think it's beautiful, it as a loving aspect to it :)
It's an amazing poem, i liked this , last two line's 're funniest one and i liked this as well.
keep writing :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol and thank you *accepting biscuit * they look really good
! totally amazing poem :P

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very charming poem, bought a smile to my face and thanks for the tasty biscuit too :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sounds like one of those old silly nursery rhymes! It made me laugh. A good funny nonsence poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol nice. good to see you star..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 10, 2011
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