Maybe This is Fate

Has My Want, turned to need? Am I now filled with greed?

I wish you knew how I feel, knowing my heart wont heal.

Maybe this is our fate, one I have began to hate.

I wish you knew how I felt, because seeing you I start to melt.

Lord only knows what you must have felt.

As I hurt you like you hurt me, Loving you will never set me free.

I wish you could see, the real lonely me. 

Author's Note

Hehee was randomly wrote on paper so I put it up.
- P.s I have been away for awhile so im trying to go though ever ones work.. will review your soon .

Reviews

[Grace Catherine C.]

Aw, I love this, it spoke to me. :)

[guiltyascharged]

]': sadface
Good one though, you really never disappoint me (:

[Sleepless]

nice poem ! love the rhyme scheme !:)

[joshua deathdealer]

Great write..clever..I enjoyed it..xx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

An amazing write, captures the wanting of love and the someone to reciprocate it and take away the loneliness is captured ever so poetically, awesome write :)