Olympic Track

I'll remember that kiss we sheared.

Under the blossom just after the track.

You claimed me as your prize, as I just glared.

So I will wait for the day you finally come back.

An Olympic winner he'll be, I'm sure he'll go all the way.

I will wait, but I will never make him stay.

When The Blossom falls, the floor shall be pink. 

Covering the green, that lies in its path.

I stand and watch, just trying not to blink.

His sprint so graceful, the others now his wrath.

An Olympic winner he'll be, I'm sure he'll go all the way.

I will wait, but I will never make him stay.

They say He'll be a star, he could win gold.

A runner and so proud, an owner of the sport.

He shows no mercy and stands so bold.

I'll wave good bye, as he leaves for port.

An Olympic winner he'll be, I'm sure he'll go all the way.

I will wait, I will never make him stay.

He left as the blossom fell, the floor turning pink.

I know he'll do great, I can see he'll be a star.

I will be watching, never able to blink.

I've been watch him all my life now we are so far.

An Olympic winner he'll be, I'm sure he'll go all the way.

I will wait, but I will never make him stay.

I know what we had, started at a running meet.

Our memories out on the running track.

I know some day we will hopefully greet.

Just to know we have each others backs.

An Olympic winner he'll be, I'm sure he'll go all the way.

I will wait, but I will never make him stay.

His heart is set on winning the Olympic Gold.

That's why he acts so bold.

He says I'll be his prize, when he comes back.

But only when, he wins the Olympic Track.

An Olympic winner he'll be, I'm sure he'll go all the way.

I will wait, but I will never make him stay.

So hopefully lets run together again.

Author's Note

Came to my head randomly.

Reviews

[mark slade]

very good. i liked this a lot.

[Black]

I'll remember that kiss we sheared.

Its Shared oo

I've been watch him all my life now we are so far.
watch isn't right take this instead if you want :):
I've been watching him all my life, now we are so far

But i loved this poem
it was just like a little story
it has passion and emotion
and i really like the girl
keep on writing!

[Enigma]

I loved the story for this. Amazing piece.

[joshua deathdealer]

Great write. I enjoyed the story here. Great feel.

[DONALD EISSLER]

You have very interesting randoms my dear glad you can share them ... your writes are very interesting always make my mind work and that i like... do keep it up I really enjoy your words ..
tk

[brenda]

this is really sweet i love the whole meaning of it the perception of the whole meeting of two persons this is really wonderful !:)

[Thea]

Lovely poem! The last stanza is great! And I really love this writing...A LOT! Keep writing... :)

[guiltyascharged]

Awwww, so cute. You'd never make him stay with you because he'll miss out on his other love-- running free. Amazing poem.. I always love reading your works. You never disappoint.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I totally love how you used the olympic metaphors so beautifully in this poem to paint a picture, of hurt yet waiting and standing by her man. And the repetition of
"An Olympic winner he'll be, I'm sure he'll go all the way. I will wait, but I will never make him stay." Is used here perfectly as it totally brings the baton home.
Really a wonderful read :)