Now I have You

Now I have You

A Poem by StarSandwich

Tell me your secrets, let me hear your screams.
Tell me your secrets, let me into your dreams.
Do you know the tables turning, revenge is all I see.
Do you know the tables turning, as I sing in glee.
Hiding again are we, hoping I wont mind
Hiding again are we, no where you can hide.

I know all your secrets now, I know them all.
I know all your secrets now, I'll bring down your wall.
The tables have turned now, I've got you in my sights.
The tables have turned now, lets not cause a fight.
Hiding for the last time, I know where you've gone.
Hiding for the last time, now for long.

Now I have you in my arms, there's no where you can run.
Now I have you in my arms, beware I have a gun.

© 2011 StarSandwich


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Very nice flow and interesting write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Now there is a woman who can pack a wallop with her words she dont need no stnkin gun lol
good write star
tk

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

o.o yeah it is random like always the ending surprises me :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love how you write about such real thing and circumstanses. excellent!

Posted 13 Years Ago


so nice..flow is just awesome..
random but impressive write:)
thanks for sharing it..i really like the ending

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the repetition in this, good job it's really good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The end is nice! Gives a new thought. Clever.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very very nice. I always save YOUR poems for last, because the best is last. Very beautiful and I love your writing style. It's got amazing flow and a brilliant rhyme, you're great at this. Keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm totally in love with this. hahaha.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Genius, the line 'now I have you in my arms, beware I have a gun.' adds so many layers to this poem, gives it an extra dimension. Top write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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