Is It Okay To Cry

I ask you now, Is it okay to cry?

For a love I once had, a love that soon ran dry.

As I lay here trapped in my thoughts, they filled me with such sadness.

Because thinking of you, causes me such madness.

But I wish you'd know how much pain you caused, just how hard I tried. 

Tonight I think I'm aloud, because tonight I already cried.

I cried so what does that make me I pathetic am I weak

Our relation she lasted long, we had an amazing streak.

You was my first kiss, my first love.

And I now have let you go, my little dove.

I didn't want to be in love, but you got what you wanted.

You made me so weak, so weak I'll be forever haunted.

Author's Note

Sorry its probably crap. but its all true this happen to me.

Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Honey, it happens to all of us; sometimes, in youth and later on, too! It seems like the end of the world, until you find love can be even better, down the road. You wrote with great passion and something good came out of your failed relationship. Keep writing! If you have so much deep down inside love to give, you will find someone who wants to give you more in return, someday, soon!! You're just startin'; life and love is a tough row to hoe!!!

[joshua deathdealer]

Aww I can defiantly relate to these feelings. Nicely done.

[brenda]

oh sar if anything im here for you trust me boys in some cases are not woth our hearts and to forget well you caught me on thth one i dont know how t forget someone fast this made me cry this was a sweet tragic poem !:) but star you are really worth more than him just dont let him get you down he klost you! :p

[guiltyascharged]

This really made tears well in my eyes. And spill over. I'm crying over this. Because it happened to me before. Except, it was worse. With a girl, too. And it wasn't even a relationship. Very beautiful write. Amazing. Your writing really honestly never disappoints me, you have such a beautiful talent

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I myself love this poem, it makes so much sense, which makes it a wonderful relatable read :)