We kissed in the stable.

Forced to stay inside,

I was only seven.

When I looked outside,

It was like heaven.

From my open window,

I watched you play.

With the other stable boy,

you all rolled in the hay.

I remember that summer,

we became friends.

You was the one,

who let me feed the hens.

Your just a stable hand,

I'm just a rich girl.

Your just a poor boy,

who used to watch me twirl.

Just a poor boy,

someone I loathed.

But I know right now,

I wish you was my betrothed.

We kissed in the stable,

wearing no shoes.

No one knew,

no one had a clue.

I'm just a rich girl, 

who walked out your life.

But never again,

I know now I'll be your wife.

So now I stand before you,

and hope that you hear.

I love you, 

and will forever my dear. 

Reviews

[NeonWolves]

Its sweet.
But i think I found a mistake when you said 'you was the one' did you mean 'you were the one'?

[Darryl Davis]

A sweet write

[Maimai]

Beautiful and romantic :) Love it. Keep writing!

[ivizarx]

beautiful and romantic yo. great story. glad to have read it, very much enjoyed it :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A fairytale come true :)

[Tasha]

Awww this was such a sweet and romantic write with terrific imagery.

[Grace Catherine C.]

I don't think the "You was the one" and the "I wish you was my betrothed" thing was necessary, proper grammer would have worked fine. But it was very cute and sweet and I did like it.

[guiltyascharged]

You write the best poetry. You inspired one of my poems, and I put it in the description. This was truly inspiring and so beautiful. Spoken of the true loves and how it can be found in the person you grew up with and who is less seemingly to be the one you love. But I think that the line "You was the one" is supposed to be "You were the one". Other than that this is the best write from you so far. I enjoyed reading this and it really made me smile. You are such a wonderful poet and you write the most amazing things. You are my idol right now, Star.

[brenda]

this made me cry this was such a sweet story i loved it !:)

[joshua deathdealer]

This is a very romantic write!! I love it.